TLO: Ch3

[seventhe]

I totally just realized that Jana actually called this chapter "In Which Martine Is An Asshole", which honestly made me laugh out loud and got me a really nasty look from my cat.

The Last Order, Chapter 3!

I am really enjoying this collab! The way we write it - in short bits, over email - makes it almost a role-play, only in language and with all the characters at our disposal. The style's very different, too, and I'm enjoying the challenge of staying in the scene and shooting something back rather than writing 983264 words of exposition like I normally do.

I need to update this on brokenprism before I forget and get like 2837 chapters behind like I am on HNtDB >.>

Comments

[irish-ais.livejournal.com]

It is the best chapter title ever. :D

Also, I totally just glanced at your tags list, and if the phrase "a distinct lack of pants" does not make it into this fic, I will be sad.

[first-seventhe.livejournal.com]

Quistis: Seifer, what the hell?

Seifer: It's hot in here.

Quistis: Uniform violation.

Seifer. No it's not.

Quistis: I note a distinct lack of pants.

Seifer. ...stop looking at me, Instructor. Pervert.

[irish-ais.livejournal.com]

Seifer would totally be like, "It's Squall's latest uniform regulation. No clothing on the bottom half. Off with the skirt, Instructor."

[first-seventhe.livejournal.com]

OK, this needs to go in this chapter, somewhere. XD

[irish-ais.livejournal.com]

SCORE.